Tech Tip: Twitter

I decided to reactivate my twitter account after seeing the tech tip assignment option. I have not tried using the group Twitter account but I enjoy Twitter sometimes because Football players and athletes always post more personal things which is nice to see. Also I like the 140 character limit, it forces me to express my idea in a short and concise manner. 

Tech Tip: Google Timer

I wanted to take this opportunity to explore the different techniques of this course that are used to enhance our performance. The timer is a great tool because it allows you to evaluate your own pace and efficiency when attempting to complete a task. I used it for the first time and I really liked it. I was able to complete tasks in a shorter time just because I allocated a certain amount of time just for that one task. 

Review

I chose to backup my blog this week since this is the last one. I also realized on the class announcements that the project stack was due on Friday. That was the first time I actually look at the class announcement because I was kind of confused. Also I saw this picture which I added below because it portrays my exact reaction yesterday afternoon. I thought it was still Saturday but I was wrong

  Struggling with Mondays.

Improvements

This course has been a pleasure to be part of. I agree with some of your suggestions and think that they will add more value to the course. Creating audio recordings is definitely something I would have utilized if available. Also, creating writing tutorial videos would be extremely helpful because it would act as an example of what quality and level of writing you expect. It will also save you time because hopefully students will watch it to avoid doing these mistakes. 

YES!! Theme readings are really nice because it provides more ideas to compare and contrast how different story origins portray the same themes. Those are all great ideas to add to the course to make it even better! 

Reading Notes: Brothers Grimm by Ashliman, Part B

The Fox and the Cat: This is a  funny story but also one with a good lesson. It talks about a cat and a fox who met by simple coincidence. The cat knowing that the Fox is a very smart and strong animal approached him very friendly and greeted him. However, the Fox being so arrogant felt like the cat should not be allowed to greet him since he is much superior to it. Therefore the Fox said why should he talk with her, what is so special about the cat? And the cat replied that she knew a very good trick to escape dogs by climbing on a tree when they are chasing her. However the fox was still bigheaded and told her that he knew hundreds of tricks and the cat was not up to expectations. Therefore, the fox suggested that he should teach her. So they went in a place where dogs started chasing them, the cat used her usual trick by climbing the tree but the fox ended up being caught by the dogs. This story is great to rewrite but it should be extended a little bit more in order to add more characters that will bring great value to the story.

The fox being attacked by the dogs. Web Source

The Peasant and the Devil: This is a story about a wise peasant who was able to fool a devil. One day when the peasant was going home, he found a devil on all his crops who ordered him to give him half of his production. However, since the peasant was smart, he negotiated and was able to get a deal that he would get anything under the ground and the devil anything above. Since the peasant planted turnips, nothing came out so the devil got angry and said next time he will get everything under the ground. Therefore, the peasant this time planted wheat and the devil did not get anything. This peasant is very smart and in my story, I could make him do so much more to the devil.

Reading Notes: Brothers Grimm by Ashliman, Part A

The Elves: This story is very nice as it brings a very good message to us humans which is about always being thankful to everyone and more importantly thank anyone that does something good for us. This story talks about a poor shoemaker who had only enough leather to make one shoe, one night before he slept, he prepared the leather to make the shoe the next day but surprisingly it was already perfectly done. Every night, he would prepare the leather and found all the shoes done and ready to be sold every morning. After a while he became rich enough and wanted to thank whoever was doing this for him. Therefore, he decided to stay up all night with his wife in order to find out who it is. It turns out to be two elves that were doing the shoes every night. He decides to thank them by offering them very nice clothes and since then they were freed and never returned. However, since he had made enough money, he was able to manage and keep himself a good business. This story is a great story to write as it includes everything and with a little bit of character twisting, it could become fantastic.

The shoemaker and his wife hiding while the Elves working. Web Source

Rumpelstiltskin: This is a very mysterious and dramatic story. It talks about a poor miller who once engaged in a conversation with the King and since he had a beautiful daughter, he told the King that she can spin straw into gold. The King ordered the beautiful girl to do so at night otherwise he will kill her. Therefore an evil witch by the name of Rumpelstiltskin and was able to do it for her but in exchange of something small but with time the King got greedy and asked for more so the beautiful girl offered her baby as the last exchange if he would help her. At the end, he felt sorry for her and let her go if she could find his name which she was able to find out at the end and Rumpelstiltskin ends up killing himself. This story is very nice to write as I can add more plots to what the evil man does to the miller’s daughter.

Reading Notes: The Fable of La Fontaine by W.T Lared, Part A

The Frog and the Ox: This is a very funny story. It talks about a frog who was not happy about his size, in fact he did not like being so small. He saw an Ox and was somehow jealous of her size. Therefore he decided to “stretch” himself in order to reach that size. Therefore, he kept on blowing himself more and more until his body could not stretch more. He ended up blowing up into many little pieces. Although the outcome of this story is very sad, the story is however very funny when you think about. I think this can also be a good pick for my story writing since I can write a comedy story from this by adding more action to it or even changing the reason why the frog decided to get bigger. Or even funnier I can add a magic potion for the frog to reach his wanted size but it will come with consequences of course just like in the story. Finally I believe that this will be the story I will be writing on.







The Old Man and the Ass. Web Source




The Ass in the Lion’s Skin: This is a very short story that talks about an ass who was camouflaged in a Lion’s skin. In the beginning everyone feared him because they all thought that he was a lion. Therefore everyone took off running. However, an old man noticed that he was not a lion due to his mouth and eyes that were not similar to those of a lion. Although, this story is short and brief, I believe that a lot can be done to it. I can add more characters and add more plots to the story. This will make it much more interesting and also I can add more drama or mystery into it to make it better.

Reading Notes: The Fables of La Fontaine by Elizur Wright, Part B

The Cat and the Old Rat: This story is very interesting, it talks about an old rat and a cat. Since they were many traps that were present, the rats did not dare go out anymore. However, the cat needed rats in order to eat but since the rats were very scared from the cat and all the traps, they did not dare leave their hiding places. Therefore, the cat had to come up with a solution and one of those solution was to fake its death. The cat hanged himself but faked it all by keeping its claws on the rope so it does not die. Since the Old rat realized that there was no more movement, he thought that it was finally safe to leave and look for food. However, the second the old rat left, the cat jumped on him and ate everything leaving only the bones. This story is a great one and I believe that it can be rewritten in a much better way. I can make it much more interesting by adding more characters and adding more plots like making the rat escape but then the cat catching him again and much more. I have no decided yet which story to write but this one is for sure a good option.

The Frog and the Rat: This story is actually very nice. I really liked the plot a lot and the ending. It talks about a frog who invites a rat home for dinner. However, the frog’s home is in the water and since the rat does not know how to swim, the frog decided to attach him to his back and take him to his home. After swimming in the water, it was time for the frog to go underwater but the rat started drowning. There was an eagle flying by and scanning the water for food and that is when he noticed the rat was drowning so he goes and pulls the rat out of the water in order to eat but pulls with him the frog as well since he was attached to him. The eagle ends up having two meals while thinking he would only get one.

The cat and Old Rat. Web Source

Tech Tip: Canvas Notification

I always struggle with declaring my assignments on Canvas after I have completed them. Therefore, this week I have chosen to do a tech tip on Canvas notifications to limit this problem. I added my email and phone number for Canvas notifications. By setting the notification settings accordingly, I will receive notifications on my phone for each assignment to assure that I have declared it or completed it before dead line.

Notification Preferences. web source

Reading Notes: Aesop's Fables by James Davies, Part A

Jupiter and the Money: This fable talks about Jupiter being a judge in a beauty contest for the baby animals. It talks about the mother of a monkey who went straight to the judges and told them that her baby was the most beautiful and she obviously deserves the prize. This fable conveys a great message which is how everyone always believes that what he creates or makes or owns is always the best there is. This story can be a perfect story to write because it offers many great points and values that can be extended on or even developed in order to add more drama or just action to the story itself.

Jupiter and the Monkey. Web Source

Apollo and Jupiter: This fable is about Jupiter and Apollo his son engaging in an archery competition. It starts with Jupiter shooting. Being the greatest and biggest, he thought that no one can beat him not even his own son. However, Apollo ended up reaching the same place as Jupiter which was Mars and Jupiter was very surprised. This story can be rewritten in many different ways that could be very fun. I can make this a whole competition between many other members of the family where I can add planet names and make the competition but also the prize even more interesting.

The Carter and Hercules: This fable talks about a wagon driver who had an accident and it fell into a rugged lane. He could not do anything so he stood there and asked god for help. Therefore, Hercules showed up and helped him put it back on track. However, he did tell him one thing after helping him “When you pray again, help yourself likewise or you will pray in vain”. This means that Hercules conveyed a great message to the driver by telling him that he should always pray god and not only when he needs help because god will not respond every time he needs helps.

Reading Notes: Aesop's Fables, Part B

The Wolf and the Lamb: This fable talks about the injustice in the world that is portrayed through the Wolf’s eyes. It is about a Wolf and a Lamb who were drinking from a river but the lamb troubled the flood with mud. Therefore, the lamb tried to explain that it was not him but it was someone else who looked like him. However, the wolf got angry and did not care, he just attacked and ate the lamb. We can see clearly here that the message that conveys is about how the Wolf decided whatever he wants because of his strength and by doing this he oppresses the rights of any other animal which is the case of the lamb here. I really like this story because of the message it has, however I believe that a lot of work can be done by making it much more interesting by adding more plots and more characters. I believe this could add a great touch of mystery and drama to it.

Wolf and the Lamb. Source

The Wolf and the Crane: This fable is also very nice, this time again about the Wolf’s injustice but in a different way. As the wolf was trying to devour a bone, it got stuck in his throat and his pain was incredible. Therefore he asked for help and that anyone who would be able to remove it would get a big privilege with the wolf. Therefore a crane went to help him and since she has a very long throat, she was able to reach the bone and remove it. However, since the wolf is not honest and did not eat because he had a bone in his throat, he ended up eating the crane that just saved his life. We have here another great example of the injustice of the wolf who did not keep his word. This story can be another great one to rewrite and it would be even better by adding all the mystery to it.

Tech Tip: Weather Widget

I added a weather widget of my beautiful hometown Beirut, Lebanon! 

Reading Notes: Robin Hood Unit by Francis James Child, Part A

Robin Hood’s Progress to Nottingham: This story was very nice and I think a great way to introduce Robin Hood’s strength. It talks about Robin Hood a young man who wanted to show how good he was with his bow and arrow to the foresters. Of course, no one believed he was any good so he decided to demonstrate his skills by competing with each one of them. It was in Fair Nottingham that all of this happened and Robin Hood ended up killing all of them but one forester so that he can tell the story. Then he took off to the merry green wood and all the foresters were buried in a row next to each other. This is really a great story but I believe that it needs a bit more action and mystery to make it more alive. I think that a lot can be done to it by adding more characters and also more parts to the story.

Robin Hood and the Ranger: This story talks about Robin Hood who went to the forest to hunt deer. However, he met a forester who forbids him of such. After a long talk, they start to fight and Robin Hood looses. Therefore, he decides to blow his horn in order to call his men for help. However, the forester offers him help and they became good companions and swear to always fight with each other so that they can be much stronger. This story is very nice and I think that I will be writing my story on this one as it captivated me the most. There is a good message that comes out of it that I will insist much more while writing my story. Also, I think that I can add more into the fight of Robin Hood to make it much more interesting.

Man Dressed As Robin Hood. Web Source

Week 10 Story: Wolverine and the Birds

 Once upon a time during the heart of summer was a wolverine running along a seashore looking for something to entertain him. The wolverine being from the wolf family was a cunning fellow that had a reputation of tricking weaker animals and then eating them. He saw a group of birds that consisted of many geese, clucks and loons. All these birds were innocently playing around in the water, minding their own business. The wolverine then yelled to them “Hey brothers, does the water feel good, I’m feeling hot and I want to join you guys for some fun!”

Wolverine in pond. Source

All the birds looked at each other with confusion as to why such a vicious animal was being nice. They seemed like they were falling for the wolverine’s trap or was he really that nice? Nobody could really tell yet, but one loon was feeling skeptical and was not so amused by the wolverine’s plan to join them in the water.

The wolverine was anxiously waiting and yelled “Come on brothers, I’m getting too hot out here waiting for you guys to decide!”. The birds looked at each other and told the wolf to join them in the cold refreshing water. The wolverine directly jumped in and caused a wave of water to splash on the little birds. This was a reminder of how bigger and stronger the wolverine is relative to the birds. The wolverine came closer to the group of birds who remained really close to one another. The birds were feeling anxious and frightened because the wolverine has come so close to them and they are not used to it. However, them being together is a essential because he would not be able to take them all at once.

As they sat in the water, the wolverine was nice to the birds and was conversing about the hot weather and telling them stories about the different animals he has been seeing recently. All that small talk was for the birds to feel comfortable around the wolverine and let their guard down. Later on, the wolverine didn’t have much to say so he proposed that they play a game “Hey brothers, why don’t we play a fun game? Let’s play tag, I will play against all of you but you need to scatter”. The birds looked at one another and wanted to have some fun so they agreed to the wolverine’s proposal.

The bird scattered around the water some going further than others while some remained close. The wolverine started the game by chasing one bird that was the heaviest one of the group. He chased him at a slow pace but away from the group so they could lose sight and he could drown him and leave him next to a tree to retrieve him later. However, he kept on yelling “Oh brother, you are a fast one I can’t tag you!” so the other birds would fall for his trickery.  The wolverine used this tactic with other birds until he collected enough birds to make a feast for him. Meanwhile this was happening, a hawk was flying around and observing the actions of the wolverine. In this hot weather, many predators are out and in search of food. No birds were left in the water, so the wolverine retraced his steps to retrieve all the birds he had killed, however he could find none. He started yelling “Where are the birds?! Who took them!!!!!”. The hawk flew closer to the wolverine and told him “Thank you for the birds, I’m sure they are going to taste great!”. The wolverine was devastated and felt foolish that he could never forgive himself. He later on went to search for more food but could not find any. A couple days later, the wolverine died from hunger.

Author’s Note: The original story is called Wolverene and the Geese from the Myths and Legends of British North America by Katharine Berry Judson. The story is about a wolverine that tricks a group of birds into joining him for a dance but ends up killing them and boiling their meat. A bird saw the wolverine’s actions so the bird went and told the Indians. While the wolverine was napping the Indians came and took the meat from the pot. I chose a similar approach to the story but with a small twist. I wanted the lesson to be that for people that do something unrightfully, the universe has its way of paying them back. Additionally, I wanted to highlight how people should not be trustworthy that easily especially in a prey/predator environment. This is relatable to our everyday life because the world is about the survival of the fittest. I chose a picture of a wolverine jumping around a pond to represent the setting I intended to portray while writing this story.

Reading Notes: Myths and Legends of British North America, Part B

Turtle and Thunder: This story is a British North American legend. The title of the story Turtle and Thunder really made me curious as to what correlation there would be between them. The turtle was getting struck by something several times. He was helpless and wanted help from anyone. The turtle tested out a deer and a bear and they both failed the test of proving that they could fight the giant he was after. A crowd of little turtles ironically proved that they were the only ones that the turtle believed would be able to stand against the giant. He took them to the lake where he lived and shortly a big stone fell down and killed the little turtles. Ever since that day the turtle hid in the water whenever a thunderstorm was striking.

Wolverene. Source

Wolverene and the Geese: This story is about a wolverene who was running around the seashore and saw many birds in the water. He lured the birds into believing that he has a bee nest waiting for them if they come to shore to dance and sing with him. As expected they came and he sang for them. He told them to all close their eyes as he was singing. As soon as they closed their eyes, he took advantage and killed them all. A loon was able to escape because he did not believe the cunning wolverene. The wolverene skinned and put the birds in a pot to boil as he took for a nap. A Jay saw the wolverene’s actions and went to tell the Indians about him. The Indians rushed to the wolverene’s location to steal the meat from the pot. When the wolverene woke up he realized that the meat had gone as he was sleeping, however he did not know it was the Indians. The jay then told the wolverene that it was him who told the Indians to come. The wolverene replied by telling the bird he was keeping a piece for him. 

Tech Tip: SoundCloud Embedded

Week 9 Story: Journey of Ugakhpa

In the Northwest of America lived a tribe called Makah. Being in the Northwest, they had two extreme seasons of winter and summer. Summer was the time when the people of Makah worked really hard to gather enough food and supplies for the dreadful winter season. Every person in the small tribe feared winter. The harsh weather made survival an obstacle for the whole tribe. As summer was coming to an end, fishing season was at its highest point. Due to the aggressive climate in the Northwest, men were mainly responsible for fishing and hunting. Many casualties were faced while fishing and hunting for food as it was a dangerous but rewarding process. As November came to an end, winter was around the corner and the people of Makah were starting to feel the hardships of winter approaching.

A brave group of ten men were labeled as Ugakhpa. Ugakhpa were rewarded with this name because of their courage and ability to overcome the strongest streams in the toughest conditions. These group of men were responsible for gathering food for the whole tribe. One day they decided to set sail and gather fish for one last time before winter season accelerated in the month of December. As they set sail, the conditions were tougher than ever. The water was frozen but was not at as rigid and firm as it would normally be. That was dangerous for the Ugakhpa men as their wooden boats were not durable enough to withstand tough ice. The fishing process was a typical one where bait was attached to rod like strings but spears were used to kill the fish. The children of the tribe collected the bait from trees and soil around the community. The water levels were shallow so it was preferable to use spears, but the water was very cold and in winter conditions falling in the water is extremely detrimental. The Ugakhpa men struggled a lot trying to find food in the lake and with the strength of the wind, the little boats they used were very unstable. As they got deeper into the water, most men were starting to fear the conditions and contemplate whether it is worth it to risk their lives and go on.

Mahka Tribe Web Source

Tall Chief was the leader of the Ugakhpa men and was known for his bravery and great achievements. Tall Chief had the ability to speak to souls and interact with nature. He had such a strong connection with the nature around him that he felt and understood things around him which none of the other tribe men could understand. The rest of the Ugakhpa men decided to retreat to their camp but Tall Chief was determined to continue his journey until he retrieves enough food for himself and his community. The men left him and Tall Chief was left by himself against the grueling weather conditions.

The weather was only getting worse. The ice on the lake was completely frozen which led to the fish to migrate. At this point, it was unnecessary for Tall Chief to remain in the lake. Instead it was time for him to set foot on the land and look for something wild in the barring cold. Unfortunately for Tall Chief, the cold was taking a toll on his body and he felt like he would not survive too long as he only had a thick fur coat on over his worn out skin. The wind kept on increasing and Tall Chief was left with only one option which was to fight the god of wind in order to save himself. The god of wind was nicknamed Windwori by the Makah tribe. Tall Chief gathered some wood and leaves to cover himself enough and try to create a small fire. In these conditions a fire is obviously unsustainable due to the strong wind but fire was needed for Tall Chief to fight Windwori. Tall Chief performed the appropriate rituals to confront Windwori but the wind was too strong and he could not make it. Trying to perform this ritual was physically taxing and took a lot of energy from Tall Chief. Eventually, Tall Chief gave up to the wind and submitted himself to nature in hopes that he can save his people in return.

Windwori was not an evil spirit and neither were any of the spirits in the forest. By Tall Chief sacrificing his body, his soul remained in the forest and combined with other pure souls to try to give back to the people of Makah. Days later, the storm came to an end. It was still cold but relatively warmer for the Ugakhpa men to go out and try to look for Tall Chief as he had not returned to his tribe yet. As they went out to the forest, they found Tall Chief's body buried under a big block of ice. The nine remaining men of Ugakhpa pushed the block of ice and were able to find a vast amount of fish that could feed them for the whole winter. Tall Chief had sacrificed his body and used his soul to ensure that his people would not struggle the way he did in the grueling conditions looking for food. That is how a true leader should be and that’s how Tall Chief will be forever remembered.


Author’s note: This story is originally called Shin-ge-bis Fools the North Wind from the American Indian Fairy Tales by W.T. Larned. It talks about a group of fishermen that went out on their last round before the arrival of the extreme cold. However, a young man who was known for his bravery decided to stay longer than the others because he did not fear the North Wind. This man was called Shin-ge-bis. However, in the original story, he was not a typical man but also a spirit. He fought the North Wind by starting a big fire in his wigwam where he was hiding from the severe weather. It was so warm inside that the North Wind could not enter. Therefore, Ka-bib-on-okka also known as the North Wind asked the fisherman to leave his wigwam in order to fight and prove that he was not scared. I decided to change that to where Tall Chief, the bravest fisherman of the Ugakhpa men, wanted to sacrifice himself for the sake of his people. Through sacrificing his body, his soul can retrieve food for the community. This was to show how true leaders sacrifice themselves for the well-being of their people. The picture I used was shows a native American tribe in severe winter conditions. That was simply to reflect how the Mahka tribe were situated in rough weather conditions. 

Reading Notes: Myths and Legends of California and the Old Southwest by Katharine Berry Judson, Part A

The Children of Cloud: This story had interesting characters by introducing the wind, sun and cloud as potential fathers of the children. They were in pursuit for their father which the mother directed to them as the cloud however they had to g through a series of tests by both the wind and cloud to prove. After proving that they are the children of the cloud, they stayed in their father’s house for a very long time. One day they missed their mother and demanded that they get sent back to their mother. To do that they went through many obstacles with alterations with ravens, roadrunner, hawk, eagle and coyote. With the help of the cloud through lightning and thunder, they were able to surpass them all. This was all a representation of why thunder and lightning go place to place and why mescals are large and near Tucson. Great story to describe a historical native American belief. 

Sierra Nevada and Coast Range

Origin of the Sierra Nevadas and Coast Range: This story is about the Sierra Nevada and Coast range. The story behind it is very interesting using two animals the crow and hawk as a symbol to each region. The crow and the hawk were both pushing the mud and parallel directions until they reached at the northern point. The crow however had gathered much more than the Hawk by stealing the hawks mud. The Hawk then chewed some Indian tobacco that made him wise and was able to take a hold of the mountains. This led to him having a greater range. This story serves as the mythical explanation of why Sierra Nevada Range is larger than the Coast range. The use of animals is symbolic to the desert setting that the author intended for. Additionally, the mentioning of Indian tobacco is representative of the famous native American chewing tobacco culture.

Reading Notes: American Indian Fairy Tales by W.T. Larned, Part A

Iagoo, the Story Teller: This story was a great read and had a great intro that made me gain interest in the core of the story. It talks about Iagoo an Indian man who knew everything about the nature and spent his time discovering everything. He can understand everyone, from humans to animals, the forest was his home. However, besides his hidden talent, he was a great story teller. When winter time came, he would hide in the wigwam because of the freezing cold of the North Pole. Then, he would start telling stories to the little kids around him that always love his stories.

Iagoo telling stories to the children. Web Source

Shin-ge-bis Fools the North Wind: After reading about the character Iagoo and his storytelling ability I was interested in hearing some of the stories he had told the children. This story was about the wind since iut was winter and the children were scared of the cold outside. Winter and Ka-bib-on-okka which meant the North wind were the fears of the children. Fishermen also feared the freezing Ka-bib-on-okkka since it was so cold that it can freeze anything. One day all the fisherman were out to get their nets back and noticed that the water has turned into a thin layer of ice. Therefore, they all knew that Ka-bib-on-okka was coming very soon and that they all had to leave. However, all of them were scared except one fisherman, Shin-ge-bis who never feared anything. He told them that the North Wind will never scare him because he has a fur coat that can withstand any cold and as for the ice layer, he can just fish through it. This story continues after to talk more about Sin-ge-bis facing the North Wind. It was a long night for Shin-ge-bis as he started a fire in his Wigwam to get ready to face the North Wind. As it came, the North Wind froze everything on its path and tried to enter the Wigwam many times but it was too hot and it could not do anything. So the North Wind challenged the Shin-ge-bis to come outside his wigwam in order to fight like a man. He felt that he was able to as he was hot enough and felt the North Wind was already weakened. He went out and by the time the Sun came he had already won. This is a great story to rewrite I believe as so much more mystery and drama can be added to it.

Week 8 Reflections

I have been enjoying most of the stories I have been reading in this course because many of them share really great moral themes. The most interesting read was the Voyages of Sindbad. I’ve allocated some of my free time to do these reading and I’ve been enjoying it a lot because I have the luxury of choosing which topics interest me. Reading notes is making it very easy for me to write a story because as I am writing my reading notes I am constantly thinking about how I can input my own ideas into the story. I am excited to read native American and Celtic tales since both cultures seem pretty interesting to me.

I am satisfied with the stories I have been writing this semester but I know I could do better. Through writing stories, I learned a lot about myself. I can write more than I thought, however the more I write the less focused I am on keeping the structure and grammar tense proper. Instead I flow with my thoughts and just write. I definitely look forward to addressing these two mistakes and trying to become better at writing.

I enjoy reading other people’s stories because it shows the difference in perspectives. Some people tend to adjust a story based on something they’ve experienced and want to implicitly share using the story while other people are creative and display that really well. I definitely can improve in giving people feedback but I don’t like hypocrisy so I prefer to focus on improving myself first and then investing more time in helping people adjust their writings.

Creative Process

Week 7 Story: The Greedy Crow

Once upon a time lived an average family in a lavish neighborhood in the suburbs of city. The Stevens family were humble, hardworking, religious and had a great relationship with each other. The father had been working as a construction worker for a real estate development company for more than 20 years. The mother was a stereotypical stay at home mother that had her children and her home as a main priority in life. The two kids Samantha and Avery were 13 and 17 years old respectively.

Samantha was a talented girl. She was one of the top students in her grade and was a natural at playing the saxophone. She was so good that her music teacher would give her private lessons just out of enjoyment of how quick she learned music. Samantha, however, had no friends, and was alienated from the rest of the kids. Being from a lavish neighborhood, all the kids dressed really nicely and were able to show off the newest phones and iPads. Internally Samantha was always sad because of how she was treated by the other kids and used music and the professor as an outlet for all her emotions. She never spoke to her parents about her feelings because she knew how hardworking her father was.

Avery was not as talented as his sister but he was still a smart kid. He was a computer nerd and spent 99% of his time in front of a screen operating on some type of monitor. He did enjoy video games and was really into playing League of Legends and he had a relatively good world ranking. Similarly to Samantha, Avery was alienated from the students in his grade because they were at an age where they all had cars and would go out just like your typical high school senior students. His father could not afford to buy him a car so his mother would drop him off which Avery felt was embarrassing. Avery was never invited to the parties or the senior events. It was truly sad to see a kid miss out on these once in a lifetime experiences. At nights where his classmates would meet to party or hang out, Avery was in his room playing League of Legends and just focused at that.

One day the senior students gathered to plan a prank. The prank they came up with was to steal Avery’s laptop during the 15 minute lunch break to get the password to his League of Legends account. The students successfully did that and took the password of his account. At this point, Avery’s only source of happiness was his League of Legends account. It was his pride, the only thing that he knew he excelled in. Later that night, Avery tried to sign in his account but realized that his password has been changed. He started freaking out and shouting in his house. His parents stormed into his room and were shocked at how furious and emotional Avery was.

Father: Son, what’s wrong?

Avery: AHHH, I hate my life!!! This can’t be happening!!

Father: SON! What’s wrong?! Are you OK?!

Avery continued to yell while crying and tossing things around having a mental breakdown.

The father approached his son and grappled him trying to calm him.

Father: Relax, son, whatever it is we will fix it.

After multiple attempts to calm him down, Avery finally calmed down. He explained to his father what happened and seemed to be very negative about it saying “I hate my life” and “Life is over”. Avery also told his father one really important thing which spilled a lot of his inner emotion.
Avery: "This is all I had.  Nobody talks to me or likes me. They all have nice cars and go out together and I am never invited because I’m a loser and this game was everything I had besides being a loser.”

His father felt with him and hugged him and explained to him that this is not what life is about.
Father: Money can never buy happiness son. Your mother, Samantha and I we all love you and we think highly of you. These kids that are judging you are still kids and don’t know any better! We have a roof over our head, we have food on our table and most importantly we have genuine love and care in this house! These things should not be taken for granted, Avery, you are lucky to have all these! Many people in life have no parents, starve from hunger or are homeless.

Avery then understood what his father was saying and from that day forward realized that he had to change his perspective in order to grow. He had to not take others' judgmental opinion and had to always look at things with the perspective of the cup being half full not half empty.

Glass Perspective

Author’s note: I read The Greedy Crow and was inspired to write this story. The story was about a crow that worked really hard to find meat. As soon as the crow found enough meat to feast on he saw a rat passing by who caught his attention. Out of greediness the crow left his meat to pursue the rat. A smaller and quicker bird was closer to the rat and was able to lure him before the crow could reach. The crow was disappointed and returned to his space where he found the piece of meat to be missing and was left with nothing. The moral of that story is that because the crow was not appreciative of what he had instead he was greedy chasing more food until he ended up with no food at all. I chose to modify the story by having a more modern and relevant setting. I felt like there was a great application of the message that the author was trying to portray but some modifications were necessary.  I chose to use a picture of a glass that is half full half empty which portrays a optimistic vs pessimist view as that was one of the morals I tried to portray in the story.

Filipino Popular Tales by Dean Fasler, The Greedy Crow