Once a upon a time lived a man named Abdo. Abdo was very
poor and lived paycheck to paycheck by traveling around and flipping items. He
would buy things that are useless to the rich and go sell it to the poor. Abdo’s
dream was to get a male child so he can be his companion on these lengthy
trips. Soon his wife got pregnant and born was the legend of Aladdin. As
Aladdin was growing up, Abdo remained to struggle with keeping up with the
standard of living he has set for his family. Years of hard work seemed not to
pay off, however Abdo was not giving up as he has his son Aladdin to befriend
him in this never ending journey.
As Aladdin grew up and became eligible to join his father in
his journeys, Abdo remained in the same struggling situation but felt that his
brave son has something special that will help them get out of this situation.
Their trips were normally to palaces where they were granted the chance to dig
out the attic or storage room and then negotiate with either the owner of the
palace or one of his helpers. One day they entered the Sultan’s palace knowing
that the chance of hitting a jackpot is high. As they were entering, Aladdin
saw a girl that looked his age on the top of the stairs. He stopped and was not
able to remove his eyes from her sight. His father then knocked him on his
shoulder and told him “Come on Aladdin, we are not here to play! We’re lucky
the Sultan is giving us a chance!”. Aladdin moved on, but in his mind all he
could think about was how beautiful the princess’ smile was. As they reached
the attic, Abdo realized that Aladdin has been mesmerized by the princess but
wanted to put some sense into him. Abdo told him “Aladdin, I don’t mean to
discourage you son, but we are poor and they live in a palace so forget it!”.
Aladdin nodded and agreed however in his mind he was thinking that he does not
believe that is a barrier.
As they look through the attic, one of the workers of the
palace is always monitoring them to make sure they don’t loot something into
their pocket and go unmentioned since the attic is clustered with unused items.
Abdo had a strategy that he would search for everything Shiny or heavy as those
two characteristics with experience have always yielded the best amount of
money. Aladdin following the instructions of his father was looking around for
an item with the characteristics mentioned. He stumbled on a small golden lamp
that Aladdin felt was something special. He smoothly attempted to hide it in
the cloth that wraps around his waist. His mother had sewed an inner pocket for
him to keep his belongings in it. While all that was going on, Aladdin could
not stop thinking about the beautiful face of the princess. He asked one of the
workers monitor if he could be directed to the bathroom as he wanted a chance
to wander in the palace and try to encounter the princess. He was granted that,
and being the adventurous brave kid he is, he wandered off to the upper levels
trying to look for the princess. To his luck, the princess was in her room
brushing her hair with her door cracked enough to be completely visible.
Aladdin sat there for a moment or two just admiring the princess until she
turned around and was in shock. Aladdin directly reacted “Sorry princess, I was
making my way to the toilet but the scent of your beauty directed me to you!”.
She smiled and said “That is no problem, on your way now mister!”. He replied
to her “Please, call me Aladdin, I will see you later”. Aladdin returned to his
father and they continued their mission of the day but Aladdin still had this
golden lamp looted in his pocket.
As they returned back home with a couple of items, Aladdin
was contemplating whether to keep the lamp a secret to his father or let him
know. Abdo was known to be a righteous person and some might say that is the
reason he is still poor to this day. Aladdin took out his lamp in his room and
cleaned with a cloth to where it was shining. There was an engraved saying on
the lamp that mentioned “Look at this lamp and read the stamp for all your
wishes we will grant”. Aladdin repeated that line over and over again until a
genie appeared from the lamp. “Hello I am the genie, and I will grant to you one
wish”. At that point Aladdin was thinking of one thing, to make his family not
poor. So he yelled to the genie “Grant us a wish of never being poor living
happy and rich”. The genie granted him the wish of being rich and so everything
changed from that day on. Aladdin went back home to his father and revealed to
him a bag of gold that the genie gave him that was large enough to make the
family gain enough wealth to live a palace that is comparable to the Sultan.
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The father was shocked and could not believe his eyes. The
son he always wanted has granted him his one and only desire. That was great
for Abdo and his family but now it was time for Abdo to ask Aladdin where did
this wealth come from. Aladdin told him that he had found a bag of gold. Abdo
felt skeptical but remained silent as his joy of seeing his family was more
important than his Morales. Aladdin then left on a journey to the Sultan’s
palace to search for the love of his life the princess. As he reached the palace
he could see her from window and just waited there for a while until she went
out on her balcony. She finally did and was surprised “Aladdin, what are you
doing here?”. He replied “My princess, it was love from first sight to me so I
am here to make you mine”. The princess was worried about the Sultan and what
he would’ve said to her if she approached him wanting to marry a poor kid like
Aladdin. Aladdin then explained to her that he is no longer poor but he became
rich. The Princess approached the sultan and explained Aladdin’s situation. The
Sultan was furious that his daughter was even considering that option as he had
princes lined up for her. However, the Sultan believed that there is no
argument to love.
As Aladdin returned to his home excited to announce the news
to his family, Abdo surprised him with a bigger news. Abdo had donated all that
wealth to charity since he does not believe that wealth was earned. Aladdin was
furious and devastated that the Sultan now would never allow him to take his
princess anymore. So he went to the Palace to tell the story to the Sultan. The
Sultan was truly amazed by the righteousness of Abdo so he still granted him
the right to marry his daughter and vowed to help him as he said “Morales such
as these make you richer than any amount of gold in your pocket”. He felt
comfortable to allow his daughter become part of such a family. They then lived
happily ever after.
Author's note: This story is originally from Aladdin and theWonderful Lamp from the ArabianNights by Andrew Lang. I chose this story because it was one of
my favorites as a child. This version is, however, very different from the one
that most of you know. In fact, it does not include any monkey or any sort of
animal or a magician. The story is about a young poor child named Aladdin who
acquires a magic lamp from a Sultan’s palace as he was searching the attic with
his father. Aladdin notices that this lamp can grant him one wish. Therefore,
he becomes a very rich man and wanting to marry the Princess until his father “Abdo”
realized this wealth was not earned and donates all the wealth. However, the
Sultan knew about this righteous deed and decided to still allow his daughter
to marry Aladdin and vowed to help them. They lived happily ever after from
there. I picked this picture to reflect Aladdin and the lamp because if it weren’t
for the lamp he wouldn’t have had the chance to approach the princess.
One of my favorite stories as a kid! I am so surprised with the differences. I am glad to hear that the original story is still a happy ending as well as the Disney version. I thought all the Disney stories were sad in the originals. In the author's note you don't really say how you story is different from the Original. I love that this gives us a back story to Aladdin's parents, in that he wasn't actually as big as a thief as he was in the Disney version. All in all great story and I can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteI love your story, this is probably the best version of I have read! To be honest, I kind of hated your Aladdin character at first. He seemed so arrogant and selfish. But as I continued to read I realized just how important it was for him to be that way. The father figure was amazing, I am glad you added him in, he is a wonderful temperament to his son. How you ended the story was amazing. I love that you made the dishonesty and subterfuge leave, but still managed to make a happy ending! Great work, I can't wait to read more from you!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this story. I've always loved the movie Aladdin but I haven't watched it in a long time. Your story made me really want to watch it again. I don't honestly remember much about the story line, so I guess I should re-watch and / or re-read the original so that I can recall the details. I didn't like that Aladdin stole the lamp and I loved how you wrote the ending with Abdo donating all of the riches and the Sultan admiring the selflessness and allowing Aladdin to marry the princess. This was a very unique way to re-tell the story. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI really like your take on this story! I also wrote about this story last week and my version was very different but we both kept it with a happy ending. I like that you incorporated a completely new character in Abdo and you made him such a humble man. The end of your story kind of matches with mine in that Aladdin was rewarded even though he told the truth.
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